The unremembered spanned an eon,
life drowned while faces blurred,
I was a God & I was alone,
I was mine the day I died
Music played,
words were a haze
the rhythm stayed
when I drowned the water moved with me
Did I cry?
Did I laugh?
Did I shout how I loved you?
Or did I let you down too?
Time sank with my heartbeat
the chill burnt through my veins
peace was so close
and then I was washed ashore
Brilliant!!!
ReplyDeletei totally love it!!
u shud turn it into a song bum!
thank u thank u!!! :")
ReplyDeleteand il try...
did you drown, or went for a swim
ReplyDeletegave up the crown, or luck was dim
what the fathers did looking for peace
what good is it if you slip
life is too short, live it
fight th fog, fight th haze
dont you get lost in a maze
do things you want to do
follow your heart, it wont lie to you
you are able, face the heat
use your hands, use your feet
cmon, get up, get the work done
dont stop fighting, just because the wave saved you once.
O-triii!!!
ReplyDeletetoo cool mere bhaee!!
Singh parivar chhaa gaya hai puree tarah se!!!
ReplyDeleteGr8 work man..
Awesome ki intehaa hai...both the Original and the follow-up comment!!
ReplyDeleteSublime. My first read here. Loved it!
ReplyDeletethnx :) glad u guys liked it...was my first attempt at poetry... so was a lil apprehensive abt putting it up here
ReplyDeletehad missed it, now i got it.
ReplyDeleteglad you're back.
:)
ReplyDeleteYou blog pretty well. Wonder why you quit?
ReplyDelete@Karry... i dint quit...just dint write for a while :)
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